Good work team, you have created an enigmatic storyline and some interesting characters. Target: You still need the final screen. Target2: I feel that some points are still not clear to your audience- perhaps a voiceover to create and anchor meaning? Target3: some audio would benefit from cross fading
Good work team, you have created an enigmatic storyline and some interesting characters. Target: You still need the final screen. Target2: I feel that some points are still not clear to your audience- perhaps a voiceover to create and anchor meaning? Target3: some audio would benefit from cross fading
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